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Fic: third degree burns

Apr. 11th, 2008 at 4:55 PM

third degree burns
...tries to imagine what Jack felt when he touched the raw mark on her lower back

psych_30: #16 fetish – Juliet

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Kate’s back is smooth and soft. There’s a small round mark that could be a bullet or could be a cigarette burn, Juliet does not ask – she’s sure Kate doesn’t want to tell – but she brushes her fingers over it and tries to imagine what Jack felt when he touched the raw mark on her lower back, the one Ben gave her just like someone gave this to Kate. She can’t, because she likes to think Jack loved her [likes to think she can still be loved] and whatever she may feel for Kate, love has nothing to do with.

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psych_30 table is h e r e.

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lenina20 wrote:

Apr. 11th, 2008 10:16 pm (UTC)

Oh!! Venturing into Kate/Juliet already!!! You are such a pro! This is perfect, the parallel, the implications and well, the parrallel of opposites (such a Lost thing!) between what Juliet feels for Jack, and what she feels for Kate. But also, of course, between what Jack felt for Kate, and for Juliet, and which these two women are.

the one Ben gave her just like someone gave this to Kate

That is such an amazingly meaniful idea. Hearbreaking and sensual, somehow. This is truly amazing.

(btw, to pimp this, I recommend,

lost_femmeslash. the mod is a friend and she'll love to read this!)

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faith_chaos wrote:

Apr. 11th, 2008 10:28 pm (UTC)

*squees* I was so unsure about this, you have no idea. I actually put off reading your and Katie's fics till after I'd written this so I'm definitely going to stop there soon. *blushes* Thank you SO much darling, your support means so much to me. And like, could you pimp this for me? Cause I'm going out tonight with some friends and I won't be in the interwebs. And certain kind of bullet wounds actually do look like cigarette burns which is creepy and wrong but kind of good for this drabble.

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lenina20 wrote:

Apr. 12th, 2008 01:33 pm (UTC)

Yeah. I'll pimp this for you (even though I'm sorry, it's late, life is crazy lately so I hadn't check my mail before)

This was a very very perfect drabble.

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faith_chaos wrote:

Apr. 12th, 2008 02:09 pm (UTC)

S'alright, life *is* crazy. And thanks again :)

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lenina20 wrote:

Apr. 12th, 2008 01:59 pm (UTC)

I pimped it in

ficinabottle and

juliet_onmyown. I recently discovered that

lost_fanfic is not fond of slash and

lost_femmeslash has restricted membership and I don't know if I'm allowed to post sb else's fic. Still, I think you should join the comm and post it there.

Oh, and I rated it PG-13, I hope that is okay.

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faith_chaos wrote:

Apr. 12th, 2008 02:11 pm (UTC)

I did not know that about

lost_fanfic but thanks for the heads up. You are beyond awesome. I just joined

lost_femmeslash so we'll see how that goes. YOu really are everywhere honey.

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slybrunette wrote:

Apr. 12th, 2008 05:22 pm (UTC)

Femmeslash!!!

Sorry,

lenina20 was totally right, I do love this (she knows me too well). And I know the people over at

lost_femmelash will too (sorry about the delay in accepting your membership -- it's a precautionary measure).

I love the attention to detail with this. That's the great thing with drabbles, good ones are that way.

This is lovely!

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faith_chaos wrote:

Apr. 12th, 2008 05:40 pm (UTC)

Thank you SO much! I was going to post right now, so, like, do I need to request an author tag somewhere?

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slybrunette wrote:

Apr. 12th, 2008 05:41 pm (UTC)

Nope, I'll take care of it (I have to start reorganizing that comm soon, so it won't much matter at this stage).

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faith_chaos wrote:

Apr. 12th, 2008 05:46 pm (UTC)

I didn't tag it all but I will as soon as it gets through :P

Thanks a million for everything!